Chicken Nuggets
So I walk into Mcdonalds and I’m ordering 20 chicken nuggets and people are looking at me very weirdly.Then I ask for more than one sauce I asked for sweet and sour so she gives me barbeque sauce and only one.I take a bite of one chicken nugget the sensation is good it is soft like the clouds and as tasty as a chicken nugget.I’m walking to the very carefully and some kids come running past and hit my chicken nuggets out of my hand! I wanted to scream but I didn’t,my emotions were everywhere I didn’t know what I was feeling. I just walked back in and got some more I was extra careful going to the car this time.As I am hiking to the car I hear footsteps I look around and I see nothing I reach the car I nearly fell on my shoelace I saved my chicken nuggets.I hop in the car and we go off home. I’m slowly getting out of the car and going inside and I open the door… My dog is barking loudly and jumping up at me and I yell at him “DOWN!”.I sat down and finally ate my chicken nuggets, it was so good to just sit down and eat my chicken nuggets.
KIA Ora I come from wigram school. I like your story and it is pretty cool. I like that you made they story funny kind of but next time you need to make the story more interesting with more action because its just a story about chicken Nuggets at the moment and also I liked that you did some description about how you felt in the story so good job.
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